My Novel Editing Journey: A First-Time Author's Story
- nativilleneuve
- Jun 20
- 2 min read
Updated: Jun 22

Writing a novel wasn't exactly a lifelong dream for me; it began more as a personal challenge. After spending the past few years creating coloring books, journals for emotional well-being, and travel guides, I found myself eager to put my imagination to a different test: writing a "real novel." This journey as a first-time novelist has certainly been eye-opening.
Recently, I reached a significant milestone: a finished-ish first draft! After countless hours of writing, revising, and wrestling with every sentence, I took a deep breath and sent it off to a trusted friend for a fresh pair of eyes. This friend is a keen reader with some novel editing experience, and I knew her insights would be invaluable for my book editing process.
I fully expected her notes to highlight areas for improvement. What I didn't expect was the specific type of feedback that started popping up in my inbox. Her comments revealed a perplexing issue: duplicated paragraphs and sections of text, sometimes slightly altered, sometimes nearly identical, scattered throughout the manuscript. This was definitely a new challenge in my writing process.
At first, I was mortified. How could I have missed something so obvious? This was supposed to be a somewhat polished draft, not a patchwork quilt of accidental repeats! My initial reaction was a hot flush of embarrassment, coupled with a healthy dose of confusion.
But as I talked it through with my friend, and retraced my own steps, the picture became clearer. As a writer, I'm always striving for clarity and impact, often refining sentences and paragraphs. During a particularly intense editing phase, tackling a comprehensive analysis document that was dozens of pages long, I was deep in the trenches of revision. It turns out that in the process of replacing old text with new, more refined versions, some of the older material simply... lingered. Think of it as an unintentional echo, a shadow left behind in the digital draft. This is a common hiccup in manuscript revision.
This experience has been a powerful, but humbling, lesson in the realities of novel writing. It's a marathon, not a sprint, and sometimes, in the flurry of creative energy and meticulous revision, these kinds of oversights can happen. It's a reminder that every draft is a work in progress, and every set of eyes on your novel manuscript is a gift.
It's also pushed me to think about my own creative writing process and how I leverage the incredible tools available today. As a first-time novelist, I'm constantly learning how to navigate the craft, the technology, and the sheer scale of building a world from scratch.
So, yes, my manuscript returned with some unexpected "ghosts in the machine." But instead of dwelling on the embarrassment, I'm viewing it as another invaluable step in my writing journey. It's a testament to the complex layers involved in bringing a novel to life, and a clear signal that even the most dedicated solo efforts benefit immensely from collaboration and fresh perspectives in book editing.
The novel editing process continues, and I'm looking forward to refining these threads until they weave a perfectly clear and captivating story.
Wish me luck! Oh and click the buttom below to follow my writing journey...good and not so good days ;)
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